Friday, August 12, 2011

Can you review my book concept? (Sci-fi with focus on human emotions)?

I don't know what to say, because seriously speaking I couldn't understand some parts of your story and somehow the whole aliens committing suicide thing after they are slaughtered doesn't make sense. You said the humans slaughter them. Maybe if you wrote this some other way, so I could understand better, then maybe I could tell you if it is a great concept.

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