Love the poem. It is good to have a poem of a singing tree! Thanks. I offer these suggestions. Change 4th. line of 2nd. v. It is a rhyming poem and it stops there. 3rd. v. hide & by do not rhyme. 4th. v. 1st. & 2nd. line need to be reworked. Both good lines, but need changing.
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